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I feel as though
we are dropping coins
into a wishing well,
setting ripples across
the small ocean
we stand in.

We push these coins
beneath our eyelids,
praying for safe fare
across the Styx;
Sometimes I wish
'twere the Lethe
and I could forget you.

Were these coins
to fall around us,
would we sink?
Would you let me drown?

I draw them
like a talisman
upon my feeble wrists;
Like eyes they stare
at my fractured soul.

I imagine pressing
my wrists against yours;
Ink on ink,
blood on blood,
giving you eyes
of your own.

When you open them,
you will see me waiting
on barren banks and shores,
rusting coins in hand.

What we do with them
is up to you;
Just know that
I will be here,
waiting.
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Author's Comments

Different from my usual style, but sometimes change is good, eh?

Also, it's nice to be back, and thank you all for the lovely comments on my journal. :) :heart:

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:iconcorpse-warrior:
Interesting piece...as I read it I get the feeling it had quite a slow pace to it...as though there was a very slow drum beat accompanying it. I like the imagry you have used as well.

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:icondaddysir:
Amazing.

This will mean something different to everyone.

To me, It means I don't have to fear death as I won't be alone when I cross the river Styx.

You won't believe it but I suddenly Feel upbeat after reading your poem.

It is said that Cleopatra wore a necklace of coins bearing the image of her lover Caesar after he was killed. Even as she took the snake bite, she held the coins of her love in heart.

Hmmm Blood to Blood. True Love won't work any other way. You must have your life fluid mixed with your love so you will always be joined.

Damn I yak too much. Welcome back to Favoriteville!

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Thank you. :) It's slower-paced alright, I think it's more suited to the tone.

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Thank you my dear. :) :hug:

I didn't know that about Cleopatra. If I ever edit this, that will be included! :D

I'm glad you felt upbeat after it, because I did too. Maybe love exists after all. :)

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:eager: =Pickled-Poppy's new competition! Go go GO!:eager:
:iconcorpse-warrior:
:hug:

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:iconyellowierd0:
I really love this :)

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Flavius: Are you trying to be funny?
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:iconbloodstainaffiliate:
Thank you. :glomp: :D

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Silence is golden, but duct tape is silver!
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:eager: =Pickled-Poppy's new competition! Go go GO!:eager:
:iconyellowierd0:
welcome! ):

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Flavius: Are you trying to be funny?
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:iconmineralmind:
Wow. This was absolutely beautiful. :faint:

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