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Architectural Redemption

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They are breeding.

                  One

by one
                                            By one.

                                                        You think they will save me?

Parasites.

They go marching.

     Two
           by two
                 by two.


They are feeding upon me.

                Feasting.

I am the flesh they desire.
                                             
                                                 Do you dare defy me? Defile me?

I am listening
            to myself.

      There are echoes
of myself
          in the empty corridors  
                                                     (blank spaces)
of my mind.

They are feeding   
          feeding
feeding.

                                                      Incubus, forgive me.

Forgive you?

I forgive no meat.

                                      Forgive me for I have sinned.

Sinned
    and sinned

                                                  I will sin again.

You are a sinner.
               Beg for your redemption.

       
                                                             I will not beg.

I will nail you
   myself
to the cross.
     

                                                            I will not beg.


You are not Jesus.

                           
                                                     I am a martyr.


You will Suffer
   for your blasphemy.

                                                 Save me.




              I will not save the unworthy.

  
                                     The unworthy.

They are breeding.

One.

         By one.


                           By one.
                                        

                                         They cannot save me.

   




               
     
Too much thinking.

Submitted to #RawEm0tion for the theme of Mental Illness. Good timing.
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AlecWolfe's avatar
I love this. It is just great. The theme, the ideas, the self-hatred, betrayal and undermining is wonderful (in the most twisted way... because of course they are twisted ideas). Great work.